2008年12月5日金曜日

My Room :Second Draft

I like my room; there are desk, chair, bed and computer in my room. All of this stuff is always neat. As the computer does not connect internet, I have to bring it second floor to use the internet. I also have many stuffed toys, which I got from crane games. These things make me relaxed. In addition, my room is very clean. Because I do not like duty, I always keep my room clean. So my room is the most comfortable place for me. Moreover, it is also the best place for me to study and to finish my homework. I really feel good in my room.

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mana さんのコメント...

First Draft

I like my room; there are desk, chair, bed and computer in my room. All of these stuffs are always neatly. As the computer dose not connect internet, I have to bring it second floor to use the internet. I also have many stuffed toys, which I got from crane games. These things make me relaxed. In addition, my room is very clean. Because I do not like duty, I always keep my room clean. So my room is the most comfortable place for me. Moreover, it is also the best place for me to study and to finish my homework. However, I go back home at late recently, I have no time to clean and relax in my room. I want more time to be in my room.